Excessive use of force by police

Excessive use of force by police

Professor’s comment: “you summarize the book fairly well, though could have included more detail. Most importantly a stronger critical analysis of the book is needed: what part of the book are you critiquing? what are some of the books weaknesses?: grammatical errors; incorrect format of the book review.” My grade was an 80.
Therefore, for revision I need to fix up grammar, have a critical analaysis of the book, and format the paper correcrly.
The book is evaluating police uses of force by geoffrey alpert, jeffrey j noble, seth w stoughton.